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A Sailors Prayer by ~Nemo-Outis:iconNemo-Outis:



Sing a song for the ocean,
something soft, something sweet,
heart her gentle laughter, and feel the waves on your feet.
For how many men have heard her mealody?
Listened as the surf called their name.
and felt the pain of need,
to plunge into those broad dark arms and sink into the sea;
Walk the floor of the briny deep,
like some Oceanid, like a dreamer lost in sleep.

What we wouldn't give to a part of that great, salty solution,
to be soaked in its mysteries, saturated in their profound meanings.
Oft, have I wished to dance with the mermen, and feel the seaweed sway,
see what the fish see, and watch the porpoise play,
to hear the mournfull call of the whale, which echoes along the reef,
and know what peace is there in the deep.

But, the far reaching abyss is too grand for out mortal arms to swim,
our eyes, too weak to pierce the sobriety and discern her shape,
doomed to gaze from above the white lashes of her waves,
that rise in the wind.
Still we long to be near, and cling to the shore
like a child clings to his mothers dress.
Living beside her, desperate neighbours we,
look upon her from behind a fence of cliffs, a wall of foam,
and watch as the tide weaves back and forth against the stone.

Each generation puts out to sea,
drawn by the crests that seem to wave,
calling us against our mothers pleas,
which warns of a watery grave.
We hear only her voice, and the call of the gulls,
for a chance to win her heart, we'd be glad to die.

So we cast our nets,
in search of our maidens hand,
as our wives watch with grey eyes, back there on the sand.
©2005-2009 ~Nemo-Outis
:iconnemo-outis:

Author's Comments

Arrr matey,
Inspired by the memories I had at my grandmothers place,
which was on the ocean. Also alot of my family were fisherman,
not anymore though.

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:iconsallystiches:
After what you said about this I expected something truly awful.
However I really (amazingly) like this one.
It reminds me a bit about the part I have to do in my schools play (I get to be a ditsy pirate!), I really actually like it.

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I'm not sure what to put in these spaces anymore...
:iconnemo-outis:
See? this is why you're my favorite.

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Regards,
Nemo_Outis
:iconsallystiches:
I seem to be everybody's favourite today.
I had three people come up to me today saying that I'm their favourite.
the first time it was my teacher after I was in the rememberance day tableu thing in front of the school.
I seem to be a drama geek this year.... but I'm proud of that.

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I'm not sure what to put in these spaces anymore...
:iconnemo-outis:
I'm sure no one deserves it more than you,
except for me....ha! right....

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Regards,
Nemo_Outis
:iconironbutterfly4567:
Aaah... I live near the ocean and lots of fishermen that are truly married to the sea... This is beautiful. For all the time I've spent staring into her murky depths, I've never written the ocean a love poem.

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Much madness is divinest sense to a discerning eye. Much sense the starkest madness. Tis the majority in this, as all, prevails. Assent, and you are sane. Demure -- you're straightway dangerous, and handled with a chain. -- Emily Dickenson

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:iconmysterria:
this is very beautiful. The first stanza doesnt flow as well as the rest, but over all its quite nice. I love the ending, great job! :hug:

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Warning! I will hug you :hug:

If it is meant to be it will find a way!
:iconisiskitten:
I knew that I would like the rest of your poetry, ne! ^_^
Beautiful. After several sad attempts, I gave up trying to write about the ocean.. :P But I still love to read what anyone else might write!!

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What I, aloud, can never speak;
What every person on earth seeks;
What I often longed to say;
But what you always flung away-
LOVE
:iconnemo-outis:
It wasn't easy for me either; I spend a very long time getting my poems just the way
I want them, and as a result I usually only get two poems up a month! I'm trying to do
better, but quality over quantity.....though some say I acheive neither!

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Regards,
Nemo_Outis

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