In China, sand is parchment
and that night my hand was a quill
you wrote "I love you" with my finger,
and baby...that kills.
Don't take this the wrong way
I know that isn't what you meant.
This is to inform you, that after all you taught me,
I couldn't learn to forget.
And after all you gave me
I still feel the loss
when you waved goodbye to me
did you know how much it cost?
I'm a dog
who's master's left,
but still wears the chain
and though you never claimed me
I still feel the pain.
Now the parchments burning
and the lilies fade,
and behind the curtain of waves
two characters remain:
忘記
But rest assured they have no power
and that you'll live on,
as the loneliness of each cigarette
and as the girl in every song.















Comments
This is very beautiful, I enjoyed reading it.
but perhaps your choice would have been a better one. Thank you for the comment!
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Regards,
Nemo_Outis
I wonder if you have any more stuffed somewhere in your bag written on napkins and small bits of toilet paper.
Anyways,yeah I can see 3 pictures that would work for this submission. Why not put the beach one (it's your only one) for the picture to this poem?
Yeah I am going to fav this I am loving this one too much
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Nemo_Outis
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Nemo_Outis
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I really enjoyed your poem. And since I'm Chinese, all the more I enjoy how you used the Chinese characters.
Brilliant (:
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look closely and you will see
all the things imaginable
those things you would never be
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