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Timeless Woes by ~Nemo-Outis:iconNemo-Outis:



I've never cared for autumn's glare,
that putrid season which lies between, light and dark.
Torments me with it's insufferable indecision!

I wake, and find myself lost in this season of mists,
was it so long ago that we slep in the sun kissed valleys?
I shield my eyes against it's sickly green sun,
which lacks summers vigor, and is empty of winters peace.
It makes me remember,
of the promise of spring, sworn not so long ago,
now broken,
by these trecherous skies!

Should I pray?
Beg for clouds of grey, and fields of white,
to release me from this purgatory; clear the
storms of mustard yellows and rust reds that burn my vision?

Come wintertide! and with your strong, north wind
clear the air of the stench of decay.
Numb me with your icy lips,
end this mockery of maytimes memory!

For what is Fall?
A harvest of dead leaves and fallen trees,
that toppled our golden king from his throne.
So tired of this excercise of death,
forced to walk that extra mile on blistered feet,
the daughter of heaven and earth,
shedding tears in the autumn rain.

Oh let her sleep, release her from this
the season of traitors!

A lament for the warmth,
a herald of the cold.
The flowers die, and the birds run,
they'll dance no more in the summer sun.
©2005-2009 ~Nemo-Outis
:iconnemo-outis:

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I really don't like Fall....it's icky

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:iconlithiumorchids:
I love your way with words.

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Pchar'kov-Your legs will be removed and buried several yards from your body so your ghost can't walk.
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If you're an ecstacy dealer, you make your own happiness.
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:iconmysterria:
A stunning piece! the imagry is amazing and your use of metaphors is wonderful and it flows like butter! :hug:

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Warning! I will hug you :hug:

If it is meant to be it will find a way!
:iconnemo-outis:
Why thank you! I hope you'll take a look at the rest of my work aswell,
I can always use more friends.

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Regards,
Nemo_Outis
:iconlithiumorchids:
I will, thank you. ^^

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Pchar'kov-Your legs will be removed and buried several yards from your body so your ghost can't walk.
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If you're an ecstacy dealer, you make your own happiness.
:iconsallystiches:
I was actually waiting for this one.
I really quite like it, and like most; it will go to my favourites,
because this one I really do like.
^_^

And I realised yesterday that I forgot to wish a happy 18th birthday...
happy 18th kay! ^_^

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I'm not sure what to put in these spaces anymore...
:iconnemo-outis:
Wow, happy 18th for me!? Thanks, who cares if you're 4 months and 10 days late.
And while I always squeel in joy when you favorite my work...
saying you will, and then not doing it...makes me cry, and I take that out on orphans...
think of the orphans Shona.

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Regards,
Nemo_Outis
:iconsallystiches:
Yet again, I knew I forgot to do something.
sorry dave, I'll go and do that now.

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I'm not sure what to put in these spaces anymore...
:iconsecretasylum:
very good and descriptive, your hate for season of fall truly shows through. I happen to think fall is the best season.

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it has won the battle
it has bled
it rests beyond my view
covered in red.

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